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hey...hey demik...reply to three open mics and post links or this is gone
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Shoosh...I'm the God mod here...don't talk to me like I'm a subordinate
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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and the good word is...wow
too long for my taste, but it shows me how bad i am great job here sir (yes its a guy) and may i ask a favor there an open mic piece i did ss:special miseducation feedback would be appreciated... |
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Funk you for the look
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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N demik doesnt return feedback favors
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I used to....
But it was a bad experience... I'll see about giving you a response later. ![]() |
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Demik ain't reply to mine either, hence i didn't reply to this ..
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^LOL...
You never asked me to reply to yours though ![]() |
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Tee hee... Dizowning
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..Soft Focus..
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this was one of the best pieces i've read in an open mic in a long time, it had a lot of description and very thought out lines a lot of good vocab excellent song, the flow was great but hard cause i couldnt pernounce some of the words correctly i dont think but all in all that was amazing keep it up man
and if you could could you peepm the song in my sig and leave honest feedback thanks man
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 |
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this is was dope
i wasnt actually going to read the whole thing but when i started i finished and i like it...u put the picture in my head good (even thought it was hard to understand)..ur wordplay and creativy and not to mention ur vocab is deffinately the dopest on the site..and u have yet to bring me a shit one... i give this a 1 and a half out of 10 :P hehe
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Nigga Ima OG.
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this was dope.
Flow was dope. Structure was dope. Vocab was dope. Concept was dope. I'd say dope piece. 9/10 long but yet affective
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Shit Demik......i see your still at it man....
PuRe forever bro i like your new style, you toned down the vocab to a point where i can actually read it without a thesaurus and dictionary..... dopeness |
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Yes, very well-written, contrary to the beliefs of Lord Baron & Co.
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This was my favorite line of all, & I am still wondering how the hell a damned British national could convey such a concept. Have you been to New York? Because that would be a commonplace sentiment in the likes of you & yours, I'm sure. . Quote:
Of course, the conclusion is full of luster, as always. Cheers, good read, deserving of Hall of Fame honors, I am sure. I like the new Soundclick track, too - it's a Badmajik production, is it not? Post more @ Rb, please.
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yo i swear dis shit was good u know...but i checked out ur tracks on soundclick and man u got some gay voice u know....tryin to sound like canibus or some shit
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