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				Tell me whats wrong with my verse and help me elevate
			 
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		This is just a quick verse I wrote. 
		
	
		
		
		
		
			I'm abouta "drop" this flow Like Lil' Jon gets "low" Once again I'm abouta spit Like my name was Corey Miller I'm killin' shit How many niggas must I prove wrong Niggas act hard but they wearin' thongs I thought you was a G But I was wrong I see You got bark but no bite They say you cant even fight Now I know why you talk so much shit You try to mask the fact that your really a bitch Your like a animal usin' camoflaouge you aint it But if I go down I'm goin' down swingin' And I got more things to talk about then bling blingin' When I spit these rhymes I'm spittin' the truth This aint for the fame this is jus' for you Dont get me wrong I want the fame But thats not why I'm tryin' to get in the game I'm trying to elevate so I can make a change 
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