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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
killashea 4 80.00%
young mike 1 20.00%
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Old 12-29-03, 02:44 PM   #16
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this was a really weak battle... let me break it down...

Killa Shea

iight young mike u suck at rap/
compared to my style its fuckin crap/2
wack
im the top emcee around aqui/
ull hafta see what its like when u fuck wit me/4
wack
ill rip u apart,throw a knife through your knee/
watch u bleed till u decease to live/6
wack
nobody will miss/give or forgive for what i did/
cause nobody gives a shit bout u/8
wack
does that ring any q's?
go waste a few bullets on yourself
wack

whole verse was wack, no hate at all, this is really newbie ish shit, elevate a lot, punches in direct, had no meaning, no personals, n wordplay, this isnt even a battle verse... and the flow wasnt even consistant, lacked everything...


Young Mike

who the fuck you think you talkin to//
i cant rap but wanted me your crew//
indirect
you from new york ?do you represent//
cause you got 3 wins but you still got no respect//
bad attempt at personals
in your freestyle you tryed to make look dumb//
your name killa but you dont wanna hold the gun//
trying but not working
so your thug//
then why dont new york show you love//
weak
shoot you up in chest//
watch you leak out blood till your very last breath//
wack
after all the shit you say people hate you that aint funny//
after you lose to me you'll get worse rankings then honey//
best line in battle, and it wasnt great either


it seemed young mike tried a bit harder with his verse, still really weak, but had better use of personals, stronger lines, just a more consistant verse...


im rating this out of 10...
killa shea - young mike

punches- 1/2
personals- 0/3
wordplay- 0/1
multi's- 0/1
flow- 1/2
creativity- 1/3

overall- 3/12

so young mike gets my vote...

when i get 100 posts ill come back to vote on the poll...

peace... stay up. 1.
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