Very dope read...

A bit too much self-pity kicking in here.

Why so depressed?

Just smoke a bowl.

Get laid.

Beat the shit outta someone.

Anyway...

Great flow, great wordplay, and real nice emotion.

Nice upwards twist at the end...

I was expecting you to break down crying, glad you didn't.

8/10

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