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01-05-04, 10:24 AM | #16 | ||
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Very dope read...
A bit too much self-pity kicking in here. Why so depressed? Just smoke a bowl. Get laid. Beat the shit outta someone. Anyway... Great flow, great wordplay, and real nice emotion. Nice upwards twist at the end... I was expecting you to break down crying, glad you didn't. 8/10
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