rate this if ya want.... im bored so im just gon try sumet.

Inspired by the way jab got totally caned in his member picture post.

Started of swiftly/
Rap Battles.com/
Now the horizon looks misty/
Wot we dun rong?/

Check it... Jab posted up his picture/
Abuse reigned supreme/
A wigga, a fake thug?/
U surely dont smoke up tha trees/
A whiteboy rapper/
No hope in tha world/
Well il tell u ur wrong/
Yeh fuck... i sed it u heard/
We shout out Rev Unit, but we dont ride wit thugz/
Its like u fink rappin... is all about gunz/
Now we hated already/
More beef than a butchers/
Mucho mess brewed up/
But still yall cant touch us/
Flows not even complete yet/
Learning curve just half way/
But we comin round like ferrari/
Move outta tha way/
I aint gona shout bout it/
infact thers no doubt/
we runnin up fast while u stumble wit gout/
dont pout for us bitches/
Trout lips get u know where/
All yall wit top flows,...... one day we gon be ther/
So this an open diss to anyone who dun take it/
No we aint gangstas and we aint tryina fake it/
Wiggas u claimin? We rakin the cash/
Im dun wit u bitches throw u out wit tha trash/

k wrote that in like 4 mins off top of head. wot yall fink... like i sed looking for help on improvements n shit. coz i wants to improve.

Peace