Telekinetic
Nothin special..
Very mediocre..
But yeah u atleast packed some punches..
Work on ur overall complexity..wordplay etc..
Not to bad..some common shit..slightly played.
..Not to bad though.. at least u showed effort..
..& aimed at ur opponent..some ok lines..
Overall just try to elevate battle alot..
Overall..Ok.

Dough
You obviously had the better vocab..
But ur verse looked like a diss piece in general..
Not one personalized punch or w/e..
Also alot of played concepts..for example the reeves line..
It was all pretty simple..not bad but its been done before..
The nelly line..*sigh* ur bout no.203 usin it.
Anyways not to bad..
But still Overall Ok

vote:Telekinetic[/B]
Cause of more creative & somewhat actual punches.

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