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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
01-10-04, 04:21 PM
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This was good but it was hard to read. I think you should seperate your bars for your piece so it can make more sense, and so readers don't et lost in the rap. Ohter than that it was good.
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