yo this was a freestyle that was came into my head while i was listenin to tupac, i dunno...jus a freestyle hope yall like it sum


I sit back watchin this world in front of me........
Hustlin the streets,runnin 4rom de police,u see....

People say thugs dont cry but they dont see what we really hide..
All the pain we feel,all the tears we try not 2 revael n confide...

Evry second can turn into ur death n b4 u know it ull b under the earth...
So either u plan out ur shit n plan jus like 2pac n have a makaveli rebirth...

So now u see thugs do cry n shed the tears of fear or loss...
dat means we b as hard as we want n follow the spiritual cross...

So when we shed the last tear we b in thugz mansion wit all de thugs n enjoyin the fun n sun.......
So jus in case,make sure u give ur loved ones love n hugs cuz u neva know when itll be ur last 1......

i know most of my bars are lengthy n im workin on my structure so give me sum feedback

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