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Im at that point where im losin focus,
where life is hard and seems rather hopeless,where things dont look as they seem ta be, Im at that point where the my vision seems ta get weezier, where i only do things if other ways arent easier,fuck life and struugle, im at that point, gimme some feed back this is only the second poem i wrote so....
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