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Old 01-16-04, 05:28 PM   #1
WillKill4Money
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From: Where the money is
At That Point(plz give feedback)

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Im at that point where im losin focus,
where life is hard and seems rather hopeless,

Im at that point where nothin has meaning to me
where things dont look as they seem ta be,

Im at that point where the my vision seems ta get weezier,
where i only do things if other ways arent easier,

Im at that point where i crack at dat joint.
fuck life and struugle, im at that point,

gimme some feed back this is only the second poem i wrote so....

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