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Old 01-16-04, 10:11 PM   #1
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a freestyle diss, NEEDS FEED BACK!!!!!!!!!!!

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this is a freestyle diss i wrote on www.illhill.com
write what you think about it, heres the link right here everything below the dotted line is the original post, holla back!
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okay this is a diss on a spoiled, rich mothaf*cka who i seriously hate. hes one of those rich b*tches who gets everything he wants, and there are tons of punk faggots always on his dick. so i'll write this to express how i feel about this whiny ass.





when i see tits on you and your b*tch, i'm lookin at sideways "8's"/
time to leave you "violated" like gays when they "slide down straights"/
unlike the presidential race, there ain't no "time" for debates/
you get cooked like eggs on skillets, see how they "incubate"/

you and your fat wad of cash, better not hang it out your wallet/
before cats think your a hooker, and start bangin out your balls b*tch/
like ending relationships, you see me and then dribble at your "lips"/
your "dawgfood" because when this flow hits,it will "KIBBLE YOUR BITS"/
your friends are "chocolate" the way they like to "stay on your hips"/

wanna cum back to my mastery? naw cuz i will be harrassing thee/
and to put it factually, you'll get exposed on TV as an "ACTUAL B"/
claimin that you "smoke trees" keep it real b*tch, the only way you can do it dawg, is by hittin one with "lit skis"/

i'll chop you up, and sell your "cannibal beef" across the nation/
that is, after you get "eaten" by an unleashed army of crustaceans/



and thats my diss, holla back!

Last edited by fuck up : 01-17-04 at 04:03 PM.
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