IIGHT I wanna get some feedback of my freestyle `bout The Soldiers (Dynasty Soldiers)

No one knows wats happenin.................................//
Something in the core is corrupting.......................//
All the skillz of The Soldiers are erupting................//
Is Dynasty Soldiers rising up again?......................//
All the other crews are beginning to drain.............//
The power of us is runnin thru ur vein.................//
We have the power to grab the skillz and contain//
When we rap we shock our oppenents we pain...//
Everyone fears us and our name....................//
Rappin with us and with others crews aint the same//
We take ur name,battle and make u shame.....//
Rap battlin,to us aint a game......................//
We battle real and we take it serious........//
The ratin of our skillz are mysterious........//
Dont come near us cuz we are deleterious//
DONE