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01-18-04, 08:46 AM | #1 | |
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My First Rhyme, Plz Advice and Comment,
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Get ready for a beat, koz its time u face da ultimate elite,
So get your little candy ass ready for a sticky white treat, Now you facin me and u feelin da trepidition, surrender now kid or escalate the situation, unlike you assclown......24/7 masturbation isnt my notion, i've got real bitchis & u stil dealin with puberty stagnation? Your Rhymes are makin rap look like crap, dont even try me, u'r a mouse inside da trap, Why you tryn to hide that you had a pre-mature birth, even dat wasa mistake, u wer'nt even meant for da earth, My word Siege has already made you extentuated, Lemme finsh dis off by u gettin expurgated. I had another one, but I think i lost it somewhere :/, I'll find it and post, any suggestions or advice?? Do you guys think I'm ready for Front Lines yet? Thanks for Reading, Have a good day and a very good night |
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