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Its a Collab Verse im doing...feeback please...
IP:
MC PINACLE’s Verse
Even at this young age, the child’s future is known not to prosper/ Drifting silently throughout the mall, accompanied by scurrying shoppers/ Young child of God, this child is without shelter, traveling alone/ Her mother scans cloths while her brothers devour ice cream cones/ All said, what’s the trouble with what I mentioned, its irrelevant/ But the vomiting and headaches are not Heaven-sent/ The peril of life’s misfortunes have sought out and grasp/ Another content victim to not last, to aid the Devil’s task/ A suspicious being in a trench coat, burn marks, struck throat/ Abducts the child in a formal procedure, the audience doesn’t take note/ Of the event that just took place, that man departed without revealing his face/ Never displaying his haste, though records show, he’s been the oppressor of rapes/ He easily escapes...moments unfold, what has happened has grown old/ The little girl eventually discovered, mutilated, naked, body has been cold/ The show is over, mother in a thriving panic, shrieking hatred to customers in Hispanic/ She harpoons her sons like the ice-burg hit the titanic, her mentality left stranded/ Cause and effect, the mother, drug-addict, angry thoughts static, commits it fatal/ Wears, “Distraught” as a label, found three days later in a closet, choked with a cable/ Sons, old enough to move on, grow on, decide life is too short and they stay strong/ But either way, the turn of events is a deep plunge, one brother does heroine, other takes a lunge/ At a gang member, Early December, an important date approaching, thinking he remembers/ Bought his sister some roses and a doll, but before he sends her, his bottom legs get dismembered/ Clutching roses and a porcelain painted figure, requiring more work for the cemetery gravedigger/ The thoughts of deceased families in the minds of relatives, memories linger/ We as a unity have no resilience and portray poor assistance to the faint of heart/ We traveled like wolves, dog for dog, but for the needy we never will embark/ God had mistaken our trust, born with flaws we snatched that opportunity/ To improve the ways of life, but instead we discovered the blood’s burgundy/ SMC and I, both understanding individuals, we’re telling a story, not to entertain you/ Not to complain to you, not to disdain with you, but we speak elaborate to explain to you/ That inner thoughts surface only to provoke, painter’s pictures, detailed with every stroke/ Persist to cope with the realness we soak through your mental, so I give the mic to SMC, I suppose…
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MC Murdera' ![]() ![]() Otherwise known as Artikulate Last edited by MC PINACLE : 01-19-04 at 09:57 PM. |
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