this was for my girl critique please




We've come to far aint shit in this world can make me forget u
And on the real i didn't know what love was untill i Met you
Plus being Young not knowing what love did so i Upset you
I plan to stay loyal and baby girl u know ima be truthfull
I keep my heart full with pain and misery with shit ive caused
Im so glad i still haven't lost you cuz i truly love you
Im different from other guys ma, so i aint gon thug u
i jus wanna hug u, love u, be together forever
and as far as our love i wanna end it NEVER
you mean to much to me, wer growing closer together as time approaches
and too tell u the truth im gettin tired of these roaches
so i wanna settle.. u can say im dumb young and trully wrong
but if i dint love u i woulda never wrote u this song
it was love at first sight from the moment i laid eyes on ur pretty face
there aint no person in this world that could take ur place
i jus wanna grace u so girl i do wut i do and i stay on my grind
they say true love is hard to find u can agree but i found Mine
The moment I saw u i felt like a mime I was left speechless
then i member given u those speeches how much i liked u in such a short period
I know u got tired of hearin it... now the feelings grew and im tellin u I Love U
Stay True Be Loyal and and lets make this the best chapter
grow up and live happily ever after....