- your structure needs some work, dont need to CAP YA PUNCHES and try to make it so your lines are about the same length. when you got started your punches were good From there it got worse wit soome kinda played punches.. you had alot of multis which arent needed, try to not focus on them and just focus on makin ya punches more complex and adding metas to them

Kilo opener wasnt that great... it was just ok, it did get better though witr some of your creative and origional punches..your structure was better then but it wasnt the best. you dont need to """ around ya punches etc and you did have some un even lines...it wasnt bad though. your ending was good and it made up for your begining.

this was a close battle but ima have to go wit Kilo, he had an overall better verse

good battle guys, keep it up

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