Ok Proof. You had a nice structure adn ya flow was only off by a little bit. Your lines were a little simplistic and your punches weren't really that hard hittin. If youchange that youll be pretty good. Village came pretty good with the personals and punches(Played on his av and name too much)but ya structure was fucked up and threw ya flow off a bit. Alright battle though.

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