yo rb yall prolly already seen me post this but i neva got feedback, i jus want to get sum feedback n see wut i got to work on n wut im elevatin in..



In this polluted world of my head im jus a mere thought
Tryin to pull away from people tellin me im sumtin when im not
Tryed so many things n failed throughout my lifes years
Ive neva had inspiration jus my heart,head,n trifelin tears
Its been a cruel world but im still standin..can i get a cheer
Oh..neva mind i got no1 for that so ill jus resist bein sincere
Ive been beaten at nething i try...thats a true fact.. not false
I must elevate n practice to my full extent jus like tryin to waltz
Im suprised ive made an effort n kept it when i said i was gonna rap
But it looks like i havent elevated im stuck in this big ass gap
Out of evrything ive put my mind on n tried,rap has survived
So im hopin 1 day itll find me n let me on its secrets so ill revive
Ill bust out of my own SHELL like a 9 milli blastin at its target
Ill be like a rehabilitated prison man or get out the retardness
Im the victim of my own actions which left me in fractions
3/4s of me sumwhere, anotha 3/4s bein frictioned traction
Although, there has been beams o lights in my darkness
So i give props to those helpin me n not leaven me sparkless
I thank u for helpin n i hope i can do the same one day fo yall
I wanna be an elevation..a blessin..a hero when yall trip n fall
I dont even know if this rap is about elevation or i wanna b a star
The way my mind is in the dirt,i think it isnt worth it, its bizarre
But I gotta stop thinkin negative n see the postive side of this
i gotta stop n try my hardest,neva give up,n avoid the abyss
Im tired of alwayz bein the newbie of sumtin that i can overcome
Put my mind head strong,n have good luck from clovercrumbs
So i end my own sorrow of pain n failure, pull myself back togetha
N go do my best to go through the fase of elevation n grimmy weatha


hope yall liked it n feedback appreciated

Peace

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