hmm....okay battle i gues....Mc came wack again...peep'd the last his wasnt too good either.....lacking punches man....werk on that ...you vocab's not bad niether is strucutre....flows Ok....metas are iight...not bad...personals...decent attempts.....
overall .. .you need some elevatin...but not too bad little elementary thats all 10/20

yte: better punches....your improving alot lately...vocab good...structure was good sum alittle stretched....personals were eh....wordplay was ok...but the thing that won was your punches were harder...more direct...good job on that....nice verse all in all
12/20

hit this upp with adequate feedback.....a good vote....honest too
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112004

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