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02-04-04, 09:46 PM | #1 | ||
..Soft Focus..
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Open Your Eyes
IP:
This is a song i'm writting for my best friend Kristy, she thinks nobody cares about her and I want to try and help her be more confident about herself
So any changes you think I should make to make this as best as possible please tell me Thanks Becareful for whom your quick to judge who cares truthfully Mikeys able to rescue your wriste no need to treat it brutally Scars tattood in shapes of broken hearts from your pain inside Stars are as beuatiful as envy open your eyes don't act blind You have to comfort yourself before you let anybody else listen True, for example I put my faith in god because i'm a christian Vital situations occur horrificaly to ensure your pain from evil Bible is there to help guide you beyond the hate of certian people They speak in envy probably because jelousy of the life you leed Portray in your direction your chin up above shoulders an proceed Advice you've given me to over come obsticles you need to use At night the eternal sleep you desire you need to easily refuse Confused I noticed but i'm here to help with words of encouragement Abused heart & soul but you wont dry to stay still like wet cement Grip my hand can you feel the love I suggest you take a deep breath Shift emotions ideas of life to why you should keep goin towards whats left Paint a picture with me your the brush on the blank paper I see A saint an angle with wings flying free over the clouds of the sea Perhaps you don't feel that gifted but close your eyes to wishes Don't collaps from others bricks of words your just to gifted School problems are every where reputation is meaninless Rule is here to walk the halls with you leave you from lonliness Death to your tears for there time is up they should be extinct Respect yourself for you not for what others necasarily think I love you forever this life and next for the angel you are Above in the heavens I'll pray to help make you realise your a star Deny the image of the ropes around you tied in a knote from peers I'll cry for you embrace your pain on my cheek just stop your tears Clutter the hate in a pile leave it in a casket for it should demies I love you an so do others we wonna help but you have to open your eyes
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Open Mics The Weathers Art http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673 My Teenage Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850 Secluded http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851 Open Your Eyes http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461 Last edited by rule : 02-05-04 at 10:14 PM. |
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