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Old 02-04-04, 09:46 PM   #1
rule
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Open Your Eyes

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This is a song i'm writting for my best friend Kristy, she thinks nobody cares about her and I want to try and help her be more confident about herself
So any changes you think I should make to make this as best as possible please tell me

Thanks

Becareful for whom your quick to judge who cares truthfully
Mikeys able to rescue your wriste no need to treat it brutally
Scars tattood in shapes of broken hearts from your pain inside
Stars are as beuatiful as envy open your eyes don't act blind
You have to comfort yourself before you let anybody else listen
True, for example I put my faith in god because i'm a christian
Vital situations occur horrificaly to ensure your pain from evil
Bible is there to help guide you beyond the hate of certian people
They speak in envy probably because jelousy of the life you leed
Portray in your direction your chin up above shoulders an proceed
Advice you've given me to over come obsticles you need to use
At night the eternal sleep you desire you need to easily refuse
Confused I noticed but i'm here to help with words of encouragement
Abused heart & soul but you wont dry to stay still like wet cement
Grip my hand can you feel the love I suggest you take a deep breath
Shift emotions ideas of life to why you should keep goin towards whats left
Paint a picture with me your the brush on the blank paper I see
A saint an angle with wings flying free over the clouds of the sea
Perhaps you don't feel that gifted but close your eyes to wishes
Don't collaps from others bricks of words your just to gifted
School problems are every where reputation is meaninless
Rule is here to walk the halls with you leave you from lonliness
Death to your tears for there time is up they should be extinct
Respect yourself for you not for what others necasarily think
I love you forever this life and next for the angel you are
Above in the heavens I'll pray to help make you realise your a star
Deny the image of the ropes around you tied in a knote from peers
I'll cry for you embrace your pain on my cheek just stop your tears
Clutter the hate in a pile leave it in a casket for it should demies
I love you an so do others we wonna help but you have to open your eyes

Last edited by rule : 02-05-04 at 10:14 PM.
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