Apathy =

Wit' Gravity for a name you'd think dis' cat was "down", but check this...
This clown spits so much hot air he has to wear anvil for a necklace!
ok opener, ok wordplay
I'm a sexist textist, so I don't like to flow against bitches...
I'm convinced that i've seen better structure on styrofoam bridges!
nice punch
Are you religious? Well if not you will be after you read this...
The shit you jot is so played, that you coudn't be saved by Jesus!
umm played
Please just, leave this forum because you can't afford to stay...
Why don't you save your self the trouble and throw your key board away!
its ok, wordplay didnt really work tho
Say, you should practice some breath control,youve' got loose lips...
Couldnt keep apathy out ya' mouth if da script came eqipped wit toothpicks!
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You should stick to your job of dickriding or take a permanent vacation...
Yes its affirmative, you and your moms share the same occupation!
ok finisher, i suppose

Gravity =

ya seeking for 'attention' looking for a 'metion' i should av let ya have abit more 'preparation' or even give ya abit of the doctors 'medication' ya see im
doin all this for a good 'cause' to get a crews 'reputation' n now i'll 'pause'.......... n rap again wiyhout 'hesitation' me n my crew are as
complex as a 'hurricane' causing destruction 'strain' n 'pain' for anything that comes in our way ya see ur ma enemy n i fuck up any 'enemy' thats stands
right in front of 'me' ur lyrics are too 'vague' im so convinced im sure ya have got 'lyrical plague' u say ur a 'sexist' 'texist' bt ur nufin but a mother
fuckin 'rapist' yo u should a stepped up ur pace 'abit' coz ur just simply too 'shit' this isnt a game or a race u should a realised that by 'now' its jus
like overgrazing ya letting animals walk all over ya like ur mum shes a 'cow' anyhow i'll take a bow' n leave ya in peace right 'now'

Couldnt break down that, just wernt feelin the style, you also had no punches.

ok this 1 goes to apathy, 1. because he had better punches, 2 better flow throughout the piece 3. btter structure and 4. more word play. no need for a break down apathy takes every catogery. Gravity ya need to work on ya flow and punches.

Vote = Apathy