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02-11-04, 02:06 AM | #1 | ||||
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Sonnet 1
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For english class... im actualy posting this here so i can retrieve it at school tomorrow and print it because my printer was broken... but ill take some feedback too...
Sonnet 1 A I first studied this single blank sheet of paper B Realizing that anger could take only my speech from me A But I know I could never attempt to deny this later B You hold in your hands, written evidence of what I try to be C I have been working to always be kind, and to be patient with you D I also have erased any record of wrongs, and of fallacies C Simply because love does not delight in evil, it rejoices with truth D Boasting is understandable, from someone as proud as me E I have learned that love is a two way road F and you get what you give, until love is found E So I am giving it my all, and I will try not to fold F Hopefully it is true, what goes around, comes around G So I keep note of my emotions with no shame to my image G Your name is forever in my heart, and my heart is my lyrics Hopefully most of you know about sonnets and their structure... This is more of a sonnet that was written from an inner-self type of creativity... so it wont be fully comprehended by most... thanks for the peep..
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