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Hot Streak 1 25.00%
Tactixx 3 75.00%
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Old 02-12-04, 08:46 PM   #16
Chugs4Life
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aight this was a real close one...

tactixx i liked your flow it was tigh as hell. Puches where ok but some didint land very hard, the ones that did where nice. Structure was a little whack but mostly it was alright didint like the .... to try to stretch your line out and make the structure look better. Vocab and word play very nice very creative. Your verse had alot of originality, dont see many verses like tha one. Nice Multies.

Hot streak you went on a little to long got bored at about 3/4 through try too keep your shit a lil shorter but sill get your point across. Your flow was lacking a bit but your nice structure made up for it. Punches landed nicely, i like the two lines "you barely beat crunch" line and the "you cant thorw a decent punch" line.

vote - Tactixx

Tactixx took this with better flow and wordplay
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