Aight... so i been practising my style and wordplay as well as flow and punch's with alot of people, as well as doing cyphers. but when i throw up a concept in the 'open mic' section that i thought up, people aint liking it..., but thats where i get confused because everyone one ive shown that i know says its completly dope and original, is it because people arn't understandin it? or am i just being miss-lead, i just wanna elevate as much as i can.......
Anyway, heres a few lines.... any feedback would be good. Just holla if you don't get the meanings....

I aint'a rip this. Ima rap BITCH ~ (WRAP)
-........ make like a WOMENISOR at christmas!
Im distant with this shit, spittin rhymes so ILL
- i give AIDS to a DEAF bitch!
And grab the lines of her death bed and rip it
Like rip-less.......Lemme flip this,


Wack.....?