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02-14-04, 02:56 AM | #1 | |
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okay...i just got done readin some shit in frontlines cuz i was bored,
and i haven't been in frontlines for months. The shit i see in there is ridiculous so i'm gonna give u all some pointers. I know we have Wackness Emergency center, but that isn't kept up to date. So its up to yall whether to listen or not. First Off: Structure with structure theres various styles to choose from in the field of being elite and advanced writing. So i will show u the up-to-date versions and the version thats still effective. I will also show u what not to use. structure should not be used: blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah/ blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah/ not end a line with a / blah blah multi blah multi blah multi blah blah~multi~multi~blah~blah blah blah multi~extended blah there is a such thing of too much multies in text. u can use those in audio but using them in text is not only considered gay but loses power for the punch. also, do not extend the lines structure that is considerable to use read some of the battles from battlers such as Evolve, Baron, Trapt Wit, G.Hod, etc... this will show u different styles of structure to use effectively. for example: blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah setup blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah punch (next word in this line here should rhyme off of the last word used in the punch) thats a common structure thats still effective another example: blah blah blah...blah blah blah..blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah... ...blah blah blah [b] okay..this is just an example that shouldn't be used my newbs right off back..this style is when u elevate so u don't mess it up. notice the .... but u don't want to use too many of those fillers. also notice the change up...though u see three lines...its actually the setup and the punch. the ... in the second line end with ... and in the third line begin with ... making it one line. just don't focus on this too much. okay...thats it for right now. This is on structure. maybe another time i will post something on punches and setups and wordplay, which u all have to learn big time. just use this to help u out and helping u elevate. hope it helped. Goodluck 13th
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