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Lawyer 1 16.67%
Diverse 5 83.33%
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Old 02-16-04, 02:58 AM   #17
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simple enough...even though Lawyer bitches...his punches were mediocre and his wordplay was weak....Diverse had much harder witty punches....and creativity throughout his verse....no hate Lawyer....but dont break up ur verse into different section either....it kinda sucks....heres the line that i think won it for Diverse...

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From Diverse:
your still new despite your disguise..........
...............lawyers=to sharks and your swimming w/lies
Lawyers tryin to sway every single vote
hoping he can fix the polls..................
..............but not if your M.I.A. buried off in Desert Holes
^lol....sharks line was dope and creative....good punch.....MIA was tight work...props....

Punches - Diverse
Personals - Lawyer...he did have more
Wordplay - Tie
Opener - Diverse
Closer - Lawyer....more creative
Vote - Diverse....for having witty hits that were original and nice....Lawyer had good personals and good hits here and there....but the breaking up of your verse was kinda bleh.....

Please Vote On My Battle On This Page Against Some Herb Named Makavelli Rest...

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