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Old 02-16-04, 09:41 PM   #1
carlosbarrett
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Exclamation Definition of a good rapper

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(this rhyme was easy, basically I just desribed Jay-Z, biggie, nas, eminem and myself and maybe you, now let's see if you like it



If you nice you don't write at all
Flows are on call
You never studder or pause
Audience left in awe
When seen a freestyle is requested
Opponents corrected
Punchlines connected with perfection
Also a hidden lesson
defying doubt is your proffesion
During a battle you get close
I can see the hair in your nose
eyelids wide and froze
at school lunchtime is a hip-hop show
but we aint talking hip-hop as you know
we talking about emcees face to face in lyrical rage
It's all freestyle no time to read off a page
Nice flows are called written
Tight flows are called bitten
It certain
when you open your mouth its curtains
your props deservin
You aint just cursin
when you spit to hear it is worth it
In fact it's perfect


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