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03-15-04, 03:00 PM | #1 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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Another freestyle. Please read and give me some feedback (I edited it a bit)
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Here it goes, yo:
I ain’t come here to gloat, ‘bout you bein’ broke/ It’s your turn to rap, you betta not choke/ But then again, for you, nigga, that might be hard/ Your rap sounds like crap, you fuckin’ look like you got SARs/ When you start to stifle, that shit begins to feed/ You get addicted, like a little kid on weed/ Don’t be deceived, your shit gets niggas movin’/ Yea, that’s true, but to the fuckin’ exits where they groovin’/ When I come up, there be categories just for me/ Soon every nigga around town will know who I be/ You’ll never surpass me, wit the career you got/ Hey, over here, nigga, I think you missed a spot/ Lemme kno wat u guys think. Last edited by SPuL : 03-18-04 at 08:24 AM. |
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