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Old 03-24-04, 04:47 PM   #1
Gunit101
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hey give me feedback tell me if is good or how i could make it better ok here it goes
When i spit my Lyricks ya'll bitches be tripping/
ya'll think what i be saying is only hating/
you assume you're the best when you still havent passed the test/
i'm telling you this shit cuz i've been through that shit/
yeah i'm new in this shit but i'm not new in the game/
so don't be hatin when you're reading my shit just remember you aint got shit/
like 2pac said "every step would be death until you're the last nigga left/
peace and keep it G
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