This was obviously another newb battle.........

Nope: You obviously came to battle wit punches in every line. They were just too basic. No real thought behind them. Anyone can just rhyme words, it's the meaning behind them that really counts. You need to work on sneakin a few personals in there so people know who you are battlin.

Ghost: You seemed to beef yourself up more than put Nope down. That shit doesn't work in here. No one wants to hear how good you are, we wanna hear how bad your opponent is. You also need to work a few personals into your verse.

Overall this was an evenly matched newb battle. Both need to gain experience and get some good advice on how to elevate. Best attempt at a punch was........

u beat don d? wow dog big i should give u a round of applause/
but not with clappin im talkin wit a gun when i pull it from my drawz/
^Not really worded right, but still was the best in the battle....

Vote: Ghost...... For ^ that......

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