ENYGMA- opener was great. im ill enough to make her class sick. nice punches throughout your whole verse. structure was okay but it had a good flow to it.
you had personals that was good thing. so it was hard to tell if this was prewritten
your biggest problem is wordplay and multies.

DISASTER PIECE- ppener passed for satisfactory. cuz it wasnt as personal. and there was a few mistakes on your typing which made it hard to understand at times. this tells me u rushed this. your structure i think was a lot better then enygmas and you had a few punches here and there. but u wasnt consistent throughout. I agree with what u said. you must of havent put much effort....cuz i seen better from u.

v/enygma

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