OK BAR BY BAR BREAKDOWN!!!!

LE couldn’t beat me with the luck of a four leaf clover
got rhymes ‘bout hot enough to freeze hell over //
Ok opener..seen better...seen worse...5/10
you wanna get your ass molested like da Klan in compton
or get your cardiac arrested faster than a black (who) done a cop in//
Ok punch...looking for you multis...5/10
got no talent so you wishing it was me that fucked your mother
this shits meticulous, metaphors ridiculous that make your mind’s engine sputter //
Ok found a lil bit of multi action...but 'your mother' lines dont really gain wins...6/10
i made it my mission to lyrically limit your emission
truth is, fags like you only come in limited edition//
Okay...decent punch...ok personal....and a lil bit of multi's...8/10
LE production just suffered a one man reduction
This whole fucking site was witness to your destruction//
Ok punch...ok closer...decent overall....6/10

Verse Score
30/50

Well i've seen a lot better from you....fix that structure makes ya look like a newbie...work on multi's and personals...not that great of a verse...was expecting a lot more....keep elevating....

My light 'edge' flashin', destroying 'shadows' with vinyal
I AM limited...you plain wack...you can't get more original
Ok punch...flow was off...ok opener...5/10
You called my crew a 'clan', but this ain' Everquest, bro
Call yourself darkness, but the only black spot is my soul
Decent punch...ok personal....7/10
Afraid to have a profile, 'cause I might use it against him
I force feed losses, and you got anotha one in ya intestine
Nice punch and i guess you made it into a personal...nice bar...9/10
Fail to see the dangers, my razors slice you till ya rotten
Ya may as well give up like other herbs...you WILL be forgotten
Okay punch...6/10
Your life is like one that could of had the least bit of purpose
But you anotha clown...bow down...
...and welcome to my 'Merk'd List' circus...
Nice punch...good closer...8/10

Well you had the better verse....need to work on ya flow....werk on multis...good personals.....keep it up...i like ya shit.....

Vote - LE

return the favor.........
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118869
P.S. shadow u forgot to poll ur vote in my battle

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