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$$UPREME |
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5 | 100.00% |
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IP:
Breakdown homies:
$$UPREME: Nice opener. You had a very good structure which keep your rhyme nice and solid, nice clean flow. You had the better Punchlines also, plus your personly's were on the spot: "$$UPREME PISSES VENOM,IT WON'T COME OFF WITH CLOROX* I'LL HAVE YOU THROWING YO SELF IN THE WASHER STUCK WITH SHIRTS AND DIRTY SOX*" Thats the punch and personly's I'm talking about, I felt that this was one of your best. You came at him at the end, defending youself also, nice flow. Chalk: Your structure was very weak and all of your rhymes were basic. Get at him with more Personly's and punches. You had some punches but I felt that $$UPREME had better ones. I was feelin' your vocab and flow, just work on your punches and personly's. VOTE: $$UPREME. return da favor: Oc6 The Caustic VS spitfire.
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