RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Killah Bwoy 2 28.57%
DisasterPeice420 5 71.43%
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Prev Previous Post   Next Post Next
Old 04-15-04, 11:40 PM   #16
Sten. Cell
Beyond Comprehention
 
Sten. Cell's Avatar
 
Posts: 283
From: New Jersey
IP:

Breakdown:
Punches: Neither
Metas: Neither
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Disaster
Flow: Disaster
Disses: Disaster

Overall-This Battle Was Different.I Didnt See Any Credible Puns If Any At All.Killah's Verse Was Too Choppy With The Flow.His Bars Were Too Long.Having Stretched Lines Makes Your Scripts Look Unorganized.When The Reader Is Going Over Your Verse,Having Stretched Lines Makes It Take Forever To Get To The End.By The Time You Do Reach The End Of The Sentence,You've Forgotten Which Lines Go Together.Plus It Takes Longer To Get To The Point Or For A Punch To Get Delivered,etc...A Lot Of Killah's Lines Were Weak & He Didnt Use Any Complexity Either.Disaster's Verse Was Based On Disses.She Used Them Better But Lacked With Puns.

Vote-DisasterPiece420

Can Ya'll Return The Favor & Vote On One Of The Battles In My Sig?
__________________
..:Return The Favor:..
Send a message via AIM to Sten. Cell  
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 10:34 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.