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Old 04-17-04, 11:01 AM   #16
Concrete
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Re$tricted-Ill verse, outstanding punches, nice vocabulary, and metaphors, great verse.

Young Duke-Good verse, liked the smiley line,but you DID state how good he was TOO MUCH, and you forced some words in there, like that toby line.

Punches-Restricted, he had nice punches, couldn't really see any diss duke threw.
Multies-To be honest, I didn't really see any in both verses.
Metaphors-Restricted, he just had more.
Vocabulary-Restricted again, he used big words and everything.
Flow/Structure-Restricted, his verse was like all in line and easy to read.


vote-Restricted, his verse was just all out better
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