Yo shadow came off pretty damn hard
And picture perfect was koo too
But I think PP needs to check his own werk
B4 he gets to criticizing others shyt
B/c shadow had better punches and vocab to me
And the personals and better structure seeled the deal
Fav line(opener): “ A picture's worth a thousand words... but just 10 bars for you
My win picture perfect, fuck you up like coke straight outa Peru”
picture perfect should try to use better rhyme scheme and harder set ups to yur punches

I just call it how I c it
Hit minez with honest feedback

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