aight..well lostchild...u had some flow..but ur rhyme scheme is basic...just AA,BB..etc. u need to use some multies...n i didnt think ur punches were hard hitting..but the last line was pretty funny...bout bein scared when i drink whiskey that was a good way to use ur opponents name..good personal...

whiskey...ur whole verse was about peter pan..i think that is gay...even if u had one reference in ur verse to peter pan,it would still be gay,c'mon now,what are u ,michael jackson or something? nothin stood out to me,n i think u were tryna feed off the other dude's verse..so

vote=lostchild

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