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04-23-04, 10:37 AM | #16 | ||
i changed my title !!
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breakdown for adebisi:
flow:straight forward no off points 7/10 volcab:good use but still kinda average 6/10 punches:you didn't try and make people laugh in a fun way you wanted to make kingz cry it seemed this was harsh my fav line,"You're not just fucking wack... you give it oral too" so mean 7/10 overall:20/30 breakdown for kingz: flow:good job better then adebisi 8/10 volcab:basic here try harder 5/10 punches:nothing really don't know where people are voting for you cause this seemed more like a verse bout yourself then making fun of him you wasted 5 lines on yourself and when there's only eight to begin with that's not good 5/10 overall:18/30 lacked anything that really hurt adebisi vote--adebisi gets my vote
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league |
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