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MCelmersglue- I like your rhymes, but your structure is very sloppy. Try to fix up the structure. Like this kid:
I'm tired of your dirty mouths to keep "whitey" alert//, the improper speech and those "Dirty South" t-shirts// I use proper nouns and predicates// rap about the white house delegates and about if you battle me the hell you'll get//. You can already tell I'm a threat because I'm precise// Even though I'm white, poor, and live off of rice// ETC. ETC. Do you feel? I like your flow. I say your in if you fix up your structure. Hit us up with another. Mixxed MC- You have any other flows or battles we can check out.
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