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DeLeon 5 100.00%
spiky2k8 0 0%
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 05-01-04, 09:28 PM   #16
L.I.
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My Vote

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Kid you aint worth the beef, your played lines aint Hurtin-Me/
& you couldnt go pound for pound with UK's Currency/
hahaha
Theres no need to 'Shout'- I'LL give 3 votes and Im not Urgent/
Because your verse is 'washed up' like your spittin Detergent/
nice
Your Flirtin with death kid, Stop playin games your not hard-fuck/
Deleon-yeah im a Smash your face in and left you star-struck/
aight
Your bars-suck & I would spit a personal about this nerd its true/
But first I have to find somebody thats even heard of you/
hahahahahahhaa
Faggot, your choosin men so Im forced to diminish this queer/
Cause around his house 'Bottoms up' doesn't mean to finish his beer/
nice

Your verse had me laughin....better than the otha spit i saw u in.....u had hot punches...funny as hell....u got a 8 out of 10....

man yo rhymes was childish that shit was senseless/
u comen at me but yo ass pennylees you got to
shop at payless/
gay
this rap i'm spitn is more like armangon aint my
rap setn/
come on man yo weak i dont u shouldn't compeat
against me/
blah
cant u see i aint no mediocre mc i'm bigest mc
that u will hear that will bring yo ass to tears
u stupid queer/
zzzz
u stay yo ass at home caus i just might break
yo bone and stone yo ass/
after that i'm gone leave yo stupid ass in a
cass then fry yo ass/
come on
be gon be gon caus i dont want to hurt to bad
to make mad/
gay

Your verse was horrible....go to tutorials and sleep over....cause u need tons of work.....

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