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native 1 16.67%
LaTiNKiTTeN 5 83.33%
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Old 05-03-04, 10:06 PM   #11
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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breakdown for latin kitten:
opener /pretty good/:
this dude is confused...callin me "boo" then sayin im transsexual//
the truth is i have better FLOW than you even when i'm MENSTRUAL//
im gonna give you a 7/10 on the opener

the midle:
good!
u dunno bout the "STREETS", cuz when it comes to yours/
TRAILS in cornfields is the closest ur town even comes to ROADS//
u from the suburbs,so how the hell can u say u were born tough/
the closest u even come to wrapping(rappin) is prolly CORNHUSKS//
give you 8/10 work on your rhymes a lil better
closer this was good:
its a pity u front cuz u couldnt last one minute in NEW YORK CITY//
he claimin he part black...but his boy even said he look like a hillbilly//
8/10
overall *23/30
breakdown for natve
your rhymes were a lil stretched
opener: it was good
overall 6/10 not worth quoting
body was good but you need to work on better punches and structure
closer bad didnt even rhyme keep workin and eleavte pimpin
my vote/lkitten
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