Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
05-04-04, 06:05 AM | #11 | ||
I have a lot to learn...
|
IP:
Dude, your rap? my verse burns it, turned out flaccid and worthless,/
dont take a geometrist to figure out that you rappin in circles,/ you stopped makin progress about one line into ya verse/ the syllable count just doesnt work, despite the rhyme dictionary you keep in your purse/ Ha, big words? man you ain't educated, put common sense first/ check ya previous verse; elements, igneous rocks and sediments, its all year 9 school work/ Why didnt u rip that bitch mullet? anyone steps to me i splatter they asses/ all you did was spit shit and sit there like a dumbass, with twinkling lashes/ straighten your glasses and "oh umm... you dont know about big words but i do"/ fuck man, by what came outta you you aint got a clue too, shit u probly have trouble tyin your shoes/ with the rap standard of a 3 yr old, a bad kid, aint it nap time for you?/ shit, cant even spell simple words.. last time i checked WORSE had a 'w'/ think you a doctor, usin medical terms, you still so far from ill/ i could do it too... im so phat i need constant doses of demoxonyl/* ....there wasnt much to work with in his last verse so i dissed his otehr one too... *demoxonyl is a dietary drug.. One Love
__________________
|
||
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|