CJ - surprised me.. dropped alot better than previously.. minus the 'dick in the barrel' line it was all pretty fresh an occasionally witty.. avoid all 'sex/dick/gay' lines like the plague.. your rhyme scheme is rather basic and altho` your structure is stable you could improve the flow by switchin` to shorter bars an a few multiple rhymes.. also you could tell you wrote for your opponent.. personals thruout.. not bad overall..

KB - started off disgustingly.. with a wack 'sex' line.. stretched bars for the whole verse killed any flow.. there were no personal punches in your verse.. coulda been dissin` anyone.. nothin` stood out as effective cos it was jus a bunch of random metas.. you need to focus on tailorin` your verse to diss your opponent specifically..

v/ CJ.

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