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Disasterpeice420 5 100.00%
A$e 0 0%
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Old 05-07-04, 06:13 PM   #16
Triple_N
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Breakdown for ase:

her rhymes won't "hurt" me cuz i have no "feelings" inside/
and she gon' say some bars talkin bout how my dick little, naw baby ya pussy is wide/

What? yo man u just admitted to having a lil dick, not a good thing..lol weak punch
it's fear i bring when u hear A$e speak/
and this girl done "sold out" to more groups than usher confessions album did in his first week/ (figure it out)

ok punch, nothin special

and i done told her for a while/ she's fuckin wit da golden child/
and those half naked pics in her SIG man she's a girl gone wild/

Man u just complimented your opponent, this jus a wasted line

i'm a "magician" and i don't even want dis "trick"/
puckerin' up her lips n da pic, if i kiss her, it would be like i kissed a thousand dicks/

pretty good punch, but kinda played, I heard that joke a million times

i'm gettin at you wit punchlines, physcial and intellectual/
it's hittin u "both ways", jus like u bein a bisexual/ (look in her profile)

nah weak punch

and she kno before dis battle started dat she wuz gonna lose/
even manachins got more ass than you/

Man it didn't rhyme

and she's trying to get in a fight wit a$e?/
she's just swingin' when i'm dodging em til a right hook bustin' her face/

Wack

u couldn't fuck wit my rhymes if they were freestyled, written or bitten/
u should jus cricticize people on dis site like LatinKitten/

What was that?

Like Martin Lawrence baby, "u besta gets da steppin'"
and u wanna see a thoro side of me i'll show a true "muderous method."

Didn't rhyme, man why u battling people way above your level

Breakdown for Dp:

Whats wrong with ya? your thoughts lack rationality,
You sayin im "sold out", you forgot your nationality?,

Not great, better than everything he had

I know it hurts frantically searching your cd collection,
To the fine the word shovel, after you poured out your confession,

decent punch

Talking high and mighty, your weapon is plagiarism,
Spouting a textbook, without permission and no wisdom,

good punch

Your in college? Fuck higher learning is expensive,
X amount of G's to learn to copy, that's strictly offensive,

Good punch

Yeah, equivalent to dickriding? yet your falsely accused?,
Think for a minute before you write, you sound despicable confused,

Good personal, an true

What You brining in a year im bringing a measure,
let the beat ride and pull it all together,

ok punch

Now Dont go runnin off and saying that i'm on your cock
Aint even sayin im hot, just simply stating that you're not.

good closer,
I don't even have to explain why dp won
Vote: dp
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