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05-08-04, 11:37 PM | #31 | ||
i changed my title !!
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breakdown for shadow's edge:
flow:good job no down spots in my eyes 7/10 volcabretty good i've seen better but it works well with this verse 7/10 punches:some alright lines nothing too hard best," leave you so lazy… that even your heart is dead-beat" good job 7/10 overall:21/30 breakdown for L.I.: flow:straight forward and nothing else i can say good job 7/10 volcab:solid use nothing bad here i think this is some of the best i've seen from you 7/10 punches:lots of real personal lines nothing too new but you stayed on him through the whole piece good job 8/10 overall:22/30 vote--i think in the end of it L.I. edged it out for the win good personals
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