Originally Posted by E Looch

break dooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooown bitchs

terror opener was around average good creativitie and all nice punch but needed to be worded better your closer was nice i liked it good personal and punch in it just soem advice dont always rhyme 3 lines together people on this site vote against it cause they dont know what they doin and the rest of your verse had ups and downs in it had some good punchs and personals and that death row wasnt to good though nice verse

and trin your opener was decent first line was stupid punch was pretty good the multi was useless though and your closer was shaky to didnt make much sence to me decen punch though just need to work on wording it and the rest of your verse
Go look in the mirror and ask yourself "WHY DO I RAP ????? " //<<< good job of tryna bite 2 of my lines and fix em together dickhead go look in my crew league battle if yo uwanna argue wit my kid dont worry though you the 2nd person today i seen bitin my lyrics thanks for the props to

vote terror