jaydogg.....c'mon man step up ur game....ur shit is really really basic....u're just writing about garbage....spit some punches man......i dont really know what else to say to u....that verse was really weak......

villain......some advice...u NEED to stop with the quotes.....do not make every single one of ur punches that type of wordplay....u need to be versatile...u can have a few lines like that......but,not in every single punch......feel me? it was becoming too repetative....n i dont find those types of punches to be too hard hitting......u know what i mean? nothin blew me away in ur verse punchwise...but it was a lot better than jay's...u spittin on a higher level,u can tell by the vocab at all..but u need to work on ur punches.....stop quotes...holla

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