im gonna have to give this to R.

R. you had just a better flow..but work on oyur structure thats all you need you need to work on.. you had coo multies and good meta4s..good use of links..but i couldnt really biew some of them cuz oyu need a user account on the old rb to view them..you was hot through out the whole flow no weak lines...i liked the way you used all of his alias against him..and your closer whos killa...all in all 9/10

Native: you was aight but i htink the fact that you had to spit 10 lines was kida unfair.
but i thought you was betta then that. see you should have droped some links or some quotes or somehting... you also could have worked on oyur meta4s..and the fact that you said you lost kida made you lose..all in all 7/10

vote=R.

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