Battle could have been better

Lyrical.........weak verse man real newbish, your punches were undeveloped setup completely wrong an your punches were weak, you had no personals at all, your vocab was really basic, you lacked any real multies, your flow was a lil off, structure was best part of verse an even that was just ok, you really need to elevate.

Mixxed.........Your was a little more of an experienced verse but could still have been better, you had alot of multie use which was good but doesn't replace real hard punches, you had a few punches that connnected, an like one personal which was weak but it connected, vocab use was pretty good, an decent wordplay, your lines were really strecthed though, gotta tighten up your structure, flow coulda been better, but you had the better verse so you won.
Vote: Mixxed MC

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